(Nate getting out of the car and looking up)
Narration: Huh, she's up on the roof again. May as well go talk to her before I leave.

(Nate climbing up)
Nate: Hey.
Rose: Oh... Hi.

(Nate going to sit down with Rose)
Nate: Mind if I join you?
Rose: No, uh, wait!

(Nate sitting next to Rose, who is recoiling)
Nate: I just figured I owed you an explanation, but I can leave, if you want.
Rose (cringing): That's not it. You're sitting in bird shit.

Chapter 1 | Page 22: Before I Leave

Is that what Aya meant when she said to be careful up there?

Fun fact: this is one of the few scripts that survived mostly intact from the first version of this story. See the original here!

2 thoughts on “Chapter 1 | Page 22: Before I Leave

  1. At the third panel I knew exactly where it is going. And I was right. XD

  2. Two for Two baby

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