Is it too late to ask for a do-over?
NARRATION: Now
(In Nate's darkened room, we see both Nate and Rose nude from the waist up. Rose appears enraged and is gesturing incredulously as she stands above Nate.)
Rose: "Are you FUCKING KIDDING ME?"
Nate (looking away): "...no."
(Rose looks shocked and hurt)
(Rose from behind pulling panties back on)
Rose (hand on the doorknob, fully dressed except for her purple button-up shirt, glaring at Nate): This is messed up.
Nate (looking down solemnly): I know.
(The door shuts behind Rose with a CLACK)
(Nate sits alone and naked on top of his sleeping bag in the dark and mostly empty room)
Nate: "...shit."
6 thoughts on “Chapter 1 | Page 17: Mess”
Doc
He is indeed doing everything in panel #1 without the kidding.
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Bonus: Not Kidding is what its called when you use a condom.
Ivan
She wouldn’t have left my room without a solid railing.
Gorbi1985
So this is the reason to keep room civilized XD
Shelly
….I feel like I’ve missed something…
Nick Wright
Hopefully I can help!
This is a new story that acts as a full reboot. It started here with a double-size update for the first two pages.
Page 3 flashes back to what happened earlier in the day to get them to that point. Now we’re all caught up to where we were at the end of Page 2.
Shelly
Ahh, thank you! Damn my horrible memory, lol!
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